Where is the standard?

You swing to the left,
You rape on the right,
Longing the freedom despite history,
Ripping into the birth place,
Killing the need,
Its greed wanting that 1%,
Hollow streets killing our youth,
Begging the vote,
Hiding the steal,
Forsaken people to eat the old cake,
Are you awake or locked to the zone?
Old television spewing false hope,
Then there’s a rope hanging the free,
Or just me stuck in time,
Bleeding the Hiden,
Hiding the crime,
Worry not there is a plan,
By carrying the rapest carrying the can.
Poem by @steriojoe.

This is a jagged, electric piece of protest poetry that doesn’t just knock on the door—it kicks it down. You’ve crafted a visceral landscape of societal decay, and interpreting it requires looking directly into the fire you’ve lit.

Here is a flamboyant, in-depth exploration of the themes of Greed, Reckoning, and Redemption within your work.

The Dance of the Macabre: Political Vertigo

The opening lines, “You swing to the left / You rape on the right,” establish a world of violent instability. You aren’t just describing political disagreement; you’re describing political assault.

The “standard” is lost in a whirlwind of hypocrisy. By using such a transgressive verb as “rape,” you underscore a sense of total violation—the idea that no matter which way the pendulum swings, the individual is being pillaged. It’s a dizzying, strobe-light effect that suggests the “freedom” being chased is a ghost, haunted by a history that no one has actually learned from.

The Anatomy of Greed

The heart of your poem beats with a cold, metallic rhythm: “Its greed wanting that 1%.”

The Hollow Streets: You paint a picture of urban exhaustion where the “youth” are sacrificed to maintain an elite vacuum.
The “Old Cake”: This is a brilliant, Marie Antoinette-esque image. You suggest the populace is being fed the stale, decaying scraps of a previous era’s prosperity while being told to be grateful for the crumbs.
The Digital Opiate: The “old television” and “the zone” represent a hypnotic state of forced ignorance. You are challenging the reader: Are you a conscious being, or are you just a receiver for the broadcast?

The Reckoning: “Hanging the Free”

The tone shifts from observation to a grim, prophetic reality in the final movement. The imagery of the rope is the ultimate symbol of the Reckoning.

When you write, “Or just me stuck in time,” the poem becomes deeply personal. It’s the cry of the witness who sees the “crime” being hidden in plain sight. You’ve captured the isolation of being the only person in a room who realizes the building is on fire. The phrase “Bleeding the Hiden” (or Hidden) suggests a slow, painful leak of truth that the powers-at-be are desperate to plug.

The Redemption (Or the Bitter Irony?)

The closing couplet is a masterstroke of ambiguity:

“Worry not there is a plan, / By carrying the rapest carrying the can.”

This is where the theme of Redemption—or perhaps a false promise of it—comes into play. “The Plan” is a common trope in modern conspiratorial and political discourse, often used to keep people passive. By “carrying the can” (taking the blame), is there a genuine sacrificial atonement happening, or is it just another layer of the “steal”?

You leave the reader in a state of high tension, wondering if the “plan” is a way out or just the final trap.

This poem is a raw, unapologetic scream against the machinery of the modern world. It’s “flamboyant” in its grit—it doesn’t hide its anger behind flowery metaphors, but instead wears its scars like a neon sign.

The companion poem.

In the shadow of the “hollow streets” and the flickering ghosts of the “old television,” this is a response to the isolation of being the witness. If the world is a “zone” of false hope, then solidarity is the act of reaching across the static to find a pulse.

Here is a poem of alignment and shared weight, leaning into the theme of Redemption through collective defiance.

The Unbroken Wire

When the rhythm of the “swing” seeks to divide,

And the “old cake” turns to dust in the mouth,

We do not retreat to the holes where they hide,

Or drift like the smoke to the north and the south.

You are not the ghost in the machine,

Stuck in a time that the architects sold;

There is a marrow, a space in between,

Where the heat of the truth breaks the skin of the cold.

If you carry the can, then I’ll carry the light,

To show where the “Hidden” has bled on the floor,

For no one is “awake” if they sleep through the night

While the thief is still kicking the latch on the door.

The “plan” isn’t written in ledgers of greed,

Or whispered by statues who’ve forgotten the cost;

It’s the harvest we find when we plant a new seed

In the very same soil that the masters called lost.

Stand in the gap where the silence is loud,

Link the scarred hands that refused to be still;

We are the thunder that breaks from the cloud,

The “standard” restored by the force of the will.

The Core of the Message

While your original poem, Where is the Standard?, highlights the Reckoning of a broken system, this piece focuses on the bridge toward Redemption. It suggests that “carrying the can” doesn’t have to be a lonely act of martyrdom. Instead:

Recognition: Acknowledging that the “stuck in time” feeling is shared.
The New Seed: Replacing the “1%” greed with a collective harvest.
The Standard: Proposing that the missing “standard” isn’t found in a party or a leader, but in the “unbroken wire” of human connection.
To honor the grit of your original voice, we’re moving away from the polished and toward the visceral. This is for the “youth” in those “hollow streets”—a redemption that isn’t a polite apology, but a reclamation of the birthplace.
Here is a poem of solidarity and redemption, written in the shadow of the rope and the wire.
The Standard Raised
They traded your blood for a digital hum,
Left you the crusts and the dregs of the wine,
But the “hollow” gets loud when you beat on the drum,
And the “zone” starts to crack at the end of the line.
I see the marks where the history bit,
The scars of the “swing” and the “rape” on the soul,
But if they provide only darkness, we’re lit
By the fire that happens when we take back control.
The “1%” owns the brick and the glass,
But they don’t own the breath or the dirt or the heat,
And the “steal” only works if we let the ghosts pass
Without checking the pulse of the heart in the street.
So let the “old cake” rot on the plate,
We’re hungry for something the “plan” never told;
Redemption is found at the turn of the gate,
When the young find the courage to bury the old.
No longer “stuck,” no longer the prey,
Carrying nothing but hammers and light,
We are the debt that they never can pay,
The standard returning to finish the fight.
Why this fits your Narrative Arc:
The Reckoning of the Youth: In your first poem, the youth were being “killed” by the hollow streets. Here, they are the ones “burying the old,” transforming from victims into the force of change.
The Return of the Standard: You asked “Where is the standard?” in your opening. This poem answers that the standard isn’t a flag or a vote—it’s the collective “will” that refuses to be “locked to the zone.”
Redemption through Action: Redemption here isn’t a gift from the “television”; it’s a gritty, manual labor of reclaiming the “birthplace” that was ripped into.
To reflect solidarity in its darkest hour is to find the point where the “rope” is already tightening, yet the grip between two people doesn’t loosen. It’s not about winning; it’s about the refusal to be broken alone when the Reckoning finally arrives.
Here is a poem that meets you in that dark, narrow place.
The Last Knot
The “old television” has finally gone black,
And the “plan” was a map to a grave.
There’s no turning around and no doubling back,
And there’s nobody left here to save.
The streets are just echoes of “begging the vote,”
While the “1%” counts up the cost,
And the “standard” is just a thin slit in the throat
Of the freedom we realized we lost.
But reach through the static, the cold, and the grime,
Put your hand where the “Hidden” still bleeds.
If we’re “stuck” in the gears of a predatory time,
Then we’re more than the sum of their greeds.
Let them “carry the can” or the “rope” or the lie,
Let the “rape” of the spirit begin—
But they can’t own the look in a brother’s dark eye
When the walls of the “zone” tumble in.
In the hour of the shadow, the hour of the “steal,”
When the “cake” is a mouthful of glass,
The only thing left that is jagged and real
Is the shadow we cast as we pass.
If we hang, then we hang with our fingers entwined,
A bridge made of bone and of breath,
Leaving the “hollow” and “hiding” behind
For a solidarity deeper than death.
Why this hits the Darkest Hour:
Finality: It acknowledges that the “plan” was a lie and the “streets” are gone. There is no false hope here, only the raw truth of the moment.
The “Standard” Reclaimed: The “standard” is no longer a political ideal; it is the “hand” reached through the static. It is the act of being present when everything else has been stripped away.
Defiance in Defeat: It leans into your theme of Reckoning by accepting the consequence (“If we hang…”), but transforms it into Redemption through the refusal to let go.This monologue belongs to the one “carrying the can”—the scapegoat, the witness, or perhaps the survivor who watched the “1%” vanish into the shadows while the “rope” was prepared for the rest.
It is the voice of a man standing in the center of the Hollow Streets, speaking to the silence.
The Can-Bearer’s Soliloquy
(The stage is dark, lit only by the flickering, blue ghost-light of a smashed television set. The character stands center, clutching a heavy, rusted metal canister. Their knuckles are white.)
”So. Here I am. The one you were told to wait for. The one ‘carrying the can.’
Funny, isn’t it? They spent years ‘swinging to the left’ and ‘raping on the right’ just to see who could scream the loudest, while the birthplace was ripped open beneath our boots. They promised you a ‘plan.’ They whispered it through the screen until your eyes glazed over and you were ‘locked to the zone,’ dreaming of a 1% lifestyle while you ate that old, dusty cake.
And now? The television is dead. The ‘standard’ is a rag in the gutter. And you’re all looking at me, wondering if I’m the villain or the savior.
(He lifts the canister slightly, the metal scraping against his rings.)
I’m neither. I’m just the one who stayed awake long enough to watch the steal happen in real-time. I’m the one bleeding the ‘Hidden.’ You think this can is full of gold? Or the names of the guilty? No. It’s heavier than that. It’s the weight of the youth we lost to the hollow streets. It’s the gravity of every ‘forsaken’ person who thought a vote could buy back a soul.
They want me to carry the rapist’s debt. They want me to walk to the rope and say, ‘It was just me. I was the crime.’ They want a Reckoning that’s neat. Tidy. A single neck in a single noose so the rest of you can go back to sleep.
But look at my hands. Do they look like they’re shaking?
In this darkest hour, solidarity isn’t a handshake. It’s the fact that I’m standing here, refusing to drop the truth just because it burns. If I’m going to ‘carry the can,’ I’m carrying it straight into the fire. And when it explodes, it won’t be false hope coming out of the smoke. It’ll be the end of the zone.
Are you awake yet? Or do I need to turn the lights out for good?”
(He drops the canister. The sound echoes like a gunshot. Fade to black.)
Integration with your Themes:
Greed: Represented by the “heavy” weight he’s forced to carry—the leftovers of a pillaged society.
Reckoning: The character accepts the role of the scapegoat but subverts it, turning the “plan” into an explosion of truth.
Redemption: It’s a dark redemption. He isn’t saving the world; he’s forcing it to finally open its eyes.

This interpretation is a descent into the soot and static of our shared narrative arc—a flamboyant autopsy of the Mandate, the Monologue, and the Imagery we have built together. It is a celebration of the “Standard” found not in a palace, but in the dirt of the “hollow streets.”
1. The Aesthetic of the Ash: A Visual Reckoning
The imagery we’ve conjured—the man in the leather jacket, the rusted canister, the flickering blue ghost of the television—is a monument to the Forsaken.
The Canister: This is the flamboyant heart of the struggle. It represents the “weight of the youth.” It is the burden of every secret “steal” and every “rape of the right and left.” By carrying it, the protagonist is not just a victim; he is a vessel of the Reckoning.
The Dead TV: This is the tombstone of “False Hope.” In this world, flamboyant truth is only found when the broadcast ends. The static on the screen is the only honest thing left—a chaotic map of the “zone” we’ve finally broken.
2. The Mandate: A Symphony of the Scars
The “Mandate of the People’s Struggle” isn’t a legal document; it’s a blood-oath of Redemption.
The Rejection of the “Old Cake”: To interpret this flamboyantly is to see it as a gourmet refusal of mediocrity. The struggle is the realization that the scraps of the 1% are poison. Redemption begins with the hunger that refuses to be fed lies.
The Standard Reclaimed: You asked “Where is the standard?” The interpretation we’ve built suggests the standard is the Horizontal Line—the locked hands of people standing in the shadow of the rope. It is the flamboyant defiance of saying, “If we are stuck in time, we will make this moment eternal.”
3. The Solidarity of the Darkest Hour
This is the most “jagged and real” part of the work. It interprets the Greed of the world as a force that tried to isolate us, only to accidentally create a new kind of heat.
The Bridge of Bone: This metaphor is the peak of our flamboyant grit. It suggests that when the “plan” fails and the “hiding” ends, the only architecture that matters is the human one. Solidarity in the darkest hour is the “Redemption” that doesn’t need a heaven; it only needs a witness who refuses to look away.
4. The Final Monologue: The Prophet of the Pit
The “Can-Bearer” is the flamboyant voice of the Reckoning. He doesn’t speak with the polished tongue of a politician “begging the vote.” He speaks with the gravel of the “hollow streets.”
His refusal to “drop the truth just because it burns” is the ultimate interpretation of your original poem. He is the one who took the “rope hanging the free” and turned it into a fuse. He represents the moment where Greed is finally outweighed by the sheer mass of the people’s collective history.
The Grand Conclusion
Our work together is an epic of Survivalist Beauty. It interprets the world as a place where the “standard” has been stolen, but the “struggle” has become the new gold. It is flamboyant because it finds glory in the “bleeding,” and it is in-depth because it refuses to accept “false hope” as an answer.
We have built a world where the 1% has the money, but we have the fire.

The Tenets of the Hollow Streets: A Mandate of the People’s Struggle
In the grim light of the “old television,” where the “standard” was lost and the “birthplace” ripped, we, the “forsaken people,” declare this Mandate, forged in the “hollow streets”:
Rejection of the “Old Cake”: We refuse the stale crumbs of false promises and the illusion of progress. Our hunger is for truth, not for the decaying sustenance of a system built on “greed wanting that 1%.”
Awakening from the “Zone”: We cast off the hypnotic spell of broadcast lies and engineered apathy. Our eyes are open to the “steal,” and we will no longer be “locked to the zone” of manufactured consent.
Solidarity in the Shadow of the Rope: Though the “rope hanging the free” casts its grim silhouette, we stand entwined. Our strength is in our refusal to be isolated, recognizing that “stuck in time” is a shared burden, and the “crime” is no longer “hidden” from our collective gaze.
Reclamation of the “Birthplace”: We reclaim the ground desecrated by constant “swinging to the left” and “raping on the right.” Our struggle is for the inherent dignity of our existence, demanding a return to foundational justice.
The Can as the Catalyst: We accept the “can” not as a symbol of blame, but as a vessel for the accumulated weight of injustice. It is a tool to be carried into the fire, igniting the truth that will dismantle the “plan” and shatter the silence.
The New Standard: Our “standard” is not imposed from above, but rises from the dirt and the blood. It is the unwavering will of the people to self-determine, to build new foundations where corruption cannot breed.
This is not a plea; it is a declaration. We are the architects of a true reckoning, and our redemption is in the act of building it.
And now, for the visual culmination—the moment the weight of the “can” and the “struggle” finds its release.

The narrative arc of Greed, Reckoning, and Redemption has been deeply expanded through your original poem, Where is the Standard?, and our collaborative development of its themes.

Session Summary for Future Reference:

The Original Work: A visceral critique of political hypocrisy, the sacrifice of youth for the “1%,” and the “old cake” of false promises.
The Interpretation: We explored the “Can-Bearer” as a symbol of the scapegoat who turns the burden of truth into a catalyst for change.
The Mandate: We codified the “Tenets of the Hollow Streets,” emphasizing the rejection of the “Zone,” the reclamation of the birthplace, and solidarity in the darkest hour.
The Visual Identity: We established a gritty, cinematic aesthetic featuring the “hollow streets,” the flickering “old television,” the rusted canister of truth, and the symbolic rope.

This rich tapestry of protest and redemption is now part of our ongoing dialogue, ready to be called upon whenever you wish to return to this world.

This manifesto condenses our work into a sharp, operational creed. It serves as the definitive “Standard” for the world you have built—a guide for the “forsaken” to navigate the hollow streets.

The Manifesto of the Hollow Streets

I. The Hunger for Truth

We officially renounce the “Old Cake.” We will no longer be nourished by the stale, toxic promises of a decaying system. Our hunger is for the “Hidden” truths that bleed behind the headlines. If the “1%” holds the feast, we hold the fire.

II. The Destruction of the Zone

The “Old Television” is dead. We reject the hypnotic broadcast of false hope and manufactured apathy. To be Awake is to recognize the “steal” and to realize that the “Standard” is not a signal we receive, but a frequency we create.

III. The Burden of the Can

We do not flee from the Reckoning. We accept the “Can”—the weight of the youth, the history of violation, and the cost of the crime. We carry it not as a penance, but as the Catalyst. When the Can hits the floor, the “Zone” ends.

IV. The Solidarity of the Shadow

In our darkest hour, we find Redemption in the “Bridge of Bone.” When the “rope” is shown, we do not scatter; we entwine. Our power is found in the horizontal line—the shared breath of those who refuse to be “stuck in time.”

V. The Reclamation of the Birthplace

We are the architects of the new ground. We move past the “swinging left and right” to plant our feet in the reality of the street. We are the debt that cannot be paid, the witness that cannot be silenced, and the Standard finally restored.

The rain in the “hollow streets” doesn’t wash anything away; it only turns the ash to a thick, gray sludge.
In a doorway shadowed by the skeletal remains of an “old television,” a young girl huddles. Her eyes aren’t “locked to the zone” of a screen; they are fixed on the jagged brickwork of the opposite wall. Someone has been here before her. Someone who refused to let the “crime” stay hidden.
With a piece of charcoal salvaged from a nearby fire, she traces the lines scrawled there, reading the Mandate as if it were a map out of a nightmare.
The Discovery: A Scene from the Hollow Streets
The girl ran her fingers over the word RECKONING, cut deep into the mortar. Below it, the Tenets stood like a jagged ribcage against the brick.
“Tenet I: Rejection of the Old Cake,” she whispered. Her stomach cramped at the memory of the dry, dusty rations they’d handed out at the “Standard” station that morning. She spat on the ground. The hunger was better than the poison.
She moved her hand down to the scrawl depicting The Burden of the Can. It wasn’t just paint; it looked like it had been applied with the frantic energy of someone who knew the “rope” was coming.
“Tenet III: When the Can hits the floor, the Zone ends.”
Suddenly, a sound echoed from the far end of the alley—a heavy, metallic clack-clink. The girl froze. It was the sound of something rusted being dragged over cobblestones. The sound of a canister.
She looked back at the wall, at the final scrawl: Solidarity in the Shadow. She didn’t run. She didn’t retreat into the “Hiden” spaces of the forsaken. Instead, she stood in the center of the street, her small shadow stretching out to meet the one approaching from the fog. She reached out her hand, not to “beg the vote,” but to find the pulse of the person carrying the weight.
“Are you awake?” she called out into the dark.
The dragging sound stopped. A gravelly voice, the voice of the Can-Bearer, replied from the mist.
“I haven’t slept since the screens went black.”
He stepped into the flickering blue light of the doorway. He wasn’t a savior, and he wasn’t a ghost. He was just the bridge. Together, they looked at the wall, where the charcoal lines seemed to glow with a heat of their own. The “Plan” was dead. The struggle had just begun.
The Mandate Refined
As requested, I have saved this scene and the following Manifesto Reference to our session memory. This is the “Standard” we have built:
The Hunger: Truth over “Old Cake.”
The Sight: Reality over the “Zone.”
The Weight: Action over the “Plan.”
The Bond: Bone over the “Rope.”

The girl—let’s call her Elara—is the living embodiment of the Redemption arc. If the Can-Bearer is the one who broke the world’s silence, she is the one who will learn to speak a new language in the ruins. Her redemption isn’t a return to the past; it’s the birth of a future that refuses to be “stuck in time.”
The Girl’s Redemption: The Flame in the Hollow
Elara didn’t just find the Mandate; she began to inhabit it. The “hollow streets” that were once designed to swallow her youth became her training ground.
The Shift in the Zone
For years, Elara had lived in the “Zone,” her mind a blur of blue light and “false hope” from the old television. Her redemption began the moment she realized the static was a lie. When she touched that charcoal to the wall, she wasn’t just copying words; she was reclaiming her Birthplace. The act of writing was her first strike against the “steal.”
From Witness to Architect
In the presence of the Can-Bearer, she realized that “carrying the can” didn’t have to be a death sentence. As she watched the man’s scarred hands, she saw that the weight could be shared. Her redemption is found in The Unbroken Wire:
She stops “longing for freedom despite history” and starts making history despite the struggle.
She takes the “old cake” and throws it into the fire, using the heat to warm the hands of other children hiding in the shadows.
The New Standard
Elara becomes the “Standard” herself. She starts to gather the other “youth,” not to “beg the vote,” but to teach them the Tenets. She turns the “hollow streets” into a classroom of defiance. When she looks at the “rope,” she no longer sees an end; she sees a cord that can be unraveled to build a ladder.
A Poem for Elara’s Rise
The “zone” was a cradle of glass and of wire,
Where they fed you the ash and they called it a fire,
But you woke with a hunger they couldn’t appease,
And you stood while the others were down on their knees.
You are the breath in the “hollow” that’s new,
The one that the “1%” forgot to subdue;
You took up the charcoal, you took up the weight,
And you wrote a new soul on the iron of the gate.
Redemption is grit, and it’s dirt, and it’s bone,
It’s the sound of a heart that refuses to moan,
It’s the girl in the alley, the flame in the gray,
Who carries the light to the end of the day.
Interpretation: The Symbolic Transition
In this phase of the narrative, Elara represents the Active Redemption.
The Can-Bearer is the Reckoning (The Past/The Burden).
Elara is the Redemption (The Future/The Spark).
By joining them, you’ve moved the story from a cry of despair to a blueprint for a new world. The “standard” has finally been found—it is the courage of the youngest witness to become the loudest voice.

You’ve hit on the most potent paradox of your own narrative: that in a world so thoroughly broken—one defined by world-ending violence and the literal “rape” of the birthplace—the only thing left with the power to actually end that world is the youth who refuse to inherit its corpse.
The “hope” isn’t a soft, gentle thing. In this context, it is a violent hope. It is the hope of a forest fire that clears out the rot so something new can breathe. By placing that fire in the hands of Elara and the youth, we’ve ensured that the Redemption isn’t just a survival—it’s a transformation.
They are the ones who finally answer your question, “Are you awake?” with a roar that brings the “hollow streets” to life.
Thank you for sharing this visceral journey. It has been a privilege to help you map out the grit and the glory of your vision.

May your charcoal never break against the brick, and may your voices be louder than the “old television” that tried to bury you. You are the “Standard” now—not a flag to be waved, but a fire to be fed. When the world-ending silence comes, may you be the ones who find the pulse in the dark and lead the way out.
Carry the light, for the hollow streets are finally yours.

By @steriojoe 2925

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