It’s there!
Hiding in reflective demise,
power hungry shakes hands with those wanting believers,
who fuels coffee cup anarchy?
while sipping fancy tea,
romancey tea.
Angels send messages through you,
me,
and those other folks.
Sitting on empty trains to full,
going to their place,
you know that place,
No!
Its where compromised dreams find meaning,
make the begging bowl for the hopefuls,
to full,
to dull,
to discontinued.
Hum a little cry.
Not today my friend,
not today,
got new info running around that brain,
stylised inspiration only ever touches the spacial few,
thank you!
If not for you,
For me,
and all the other folks I’d be lost!
found a reason today.
We would nolonger embrace the rocks we will smash
with our labour,
I am armed with the knowledge of a bigger plan!
Poem by @steriojoe.
Inspired by @youmeandtheotherfolks
Image by @steriojoe.
AI Geminis interpretation,
That is a powerful, evocative, and quite complex piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing it and citing the inspiration!
It touches on themes of disillusionment vs. hope, the search for meaning, and the power of connection/inspiration.
Here are a few of the key themes and images that stand out:
Key Themes & Imagery
- The Discovery of Purpose: The repeated lines “Found a reason today” and the conclusion, “I am armed with the knowledge of a bigger plan!” frame the entire poem as a journey from confusion to clarity.
- Contrasts in Power and Belief: The images of “power hungrily shakes hands with those wanting believers” juxtaposed with the mundane, almost ironic, act of asking, “who fuels coffee cup anarchy?” while sipping “fancy tea, romancey tea.” This suggests a commentary on the superficiality of certain societal movements or elites.
- Compromised Dreams: The concept of “that place” where “compromised dreams find meaning” and then create a “begging bowl for the hopefuls” that is filled “to full, to dull, to discontinued” is a strong metaphor for systems that initially offer hope but ultimately dilute or extinguish true aspirations.
- The Importance of Others: The line “If not for you, / For me, / and all the other folks I’d be lost!” highlights the central role of community and mutual inspiration (“Angels send messages through you, me, and those other folks”).
- A Shift in Perspective: The decision “Not today my friend, not today,” followed by the receipt of “new info running around that brain,” signals a rejection of despair and an embrace of a higher, more “stylised inspiration.”
- Enduring Labor: The final image, “We would nolonger embrace the rocks we will smash / with our labour,” suggests that the newfound “bigger plan” doesn’t eliminate hard work, but gives it a purpose and meaning worth embracing.
It’s a wonderful blend of spiritual, philosophical, and social commentary.
Interpreting the Visuals Implied by the Poem
The poem creates a dynamic, contrasting landscape. Your digital drawing likely captures this internal and external tension:
1. The Landscape of Compromise
The poem speaks of a place where “compromised dreams find meaning” and mentions “empty trains to full.”
- Potential Visuals: The drawing might feature contrasting environments. Perhaps a monochromatic, stark, or reflective cityscape (“reflective demise”) that represents the systems and compromises, juxtaposed with elements of vibrant, almost chaotic color (the “coffee cup anarchy”).
- Symbolism: The reflection in the drawing could be key, highlighting the feeling of “reflective demise”—the moment of self-realization where one sees the hollowness of societal pursuits before finding a new path.
2. The Figures of Power and Hope
The poem has distinct groups: “power hungrily shakes hands,” “believers,” “you, me, and those other folks,” and the “hopefuls.”
- Potential Visuals:
- The Power/Elite: These figures might be depicted in sharp, stylized, and perhaps overly neat attire (mirroring the “sipping fancy tea” line), perhaps in shadow or with features obscured, suggesting their detachment.
- The Collective/Inspiration (@youmeandtheotherfolks): This group is the source of the “Angels send messages through you” line. They could be rendered with more fluid lines, warmth, or subtle light, symbolizing genuine connection and the flow of “new info.”
- Composition: The composition could place the detached figures (power) high up or in the background, looking down, while the collective (you, me, and other folks) are closer to the viewer or centered in the piece, representing their immediate, tangible impact.
3. The New Dawn & Stylized Inspiration
The poem pivots on the discovery of a “reason today” and being armed with “the knowledge of a bigger plan” through “stylised inspiration.”
- Potential Visuals:
- Color Shift: The drawing might employ a dramatic shift in lighting or color palette toward the end of the composition. Moving from the dull, full, or discontinued blues/grays (representing the “begging bowl”) to a burst of unique, specific, and “stylised” colors—a visual representation of that new, filtered inspiration.
- Abstraction/Detail: Since the inspiration is stylized, the drawing itself might feature a distinct, refined artistic style—the “stylised inspiration” mentioned in the text is reflected in the artist’s specific, intentional technique and aesthetic. The knowledge of the “bigger plan” could be a complex, geometric, or spiraling pattern contrasted against the simple shapes of the compromised dreams.
- Action: The figures might be poised, not in despair, but ready for the labor (“embrace the rocks we will smash”), suggesting forward motion or firm resolve in their stance.
In summary, your digital drawing likely serves as a visual map for the poem’s journey: from reflective critique of superficiality and failed dreams, through a moment of human connection, to a final stance of empowerment and the embrace of meaningful labor backed by a unique, powerful, and stylized vision.

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