Green Green grass of dome.

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The working roads we walk b4,
Stinging rainy sleet,
Razer frost on maps of old,
Mirochipped on the fastest boost,
Aging snugs where the brawn ale roost,
Angel painting well withiin lives,
Binding locks running for keys, yes please,!
Old peddle tapping in the groove, nice move.

The men of steel build wave after rave,
“”Oh! Behave” light melting in all we can see,
Wild sea’s in a flying tin can, knowing about those sleeping pills,
Quite chilling to see those oscillation busters ticking like clocks.
Clocks to wake, Clocks to fall asleep bep bed,
Clock on time while running late
The gates clocked off,
As the greed plays offer a lock, rock.
Mask of honour mark of right,
Scares so true they need a new day,
To old “old shadow boxer. Beat lost.

To blame is a shame bring old rane,
Occupational hazards flooding the game,
Blame those f*#kers hogging the pot, what pot?
Melting hot or was it pot?
Golden shot spat one those moods,
More food ya gaffer thin mint, glitzy,
Beatting heart of a network of free, are we?
Miles of junk brood belching ticty toc,
Remember all those lost doors,
Would want, want more and pay this bill,
App every 30 seconds and ya almost there.

AI Geminis interpretation,

That’s a very evocative and dense piece of writing!

​It reads like a stream-of-consciousness poem or a set of lyrical verses, blending modern and archaic imagery, and touching on themes of technology, nostalgia, work, time, and hidden conflicts.

​Here’s a breakdown of some of the key themes and imagery I pick up on:

​里 Key Themes and Imagery

​1. Nostalgia vs. Technology

  • Old vs. New: Juxtaposition of “Razer frost on maps of old” and “Mirochipped on the fastest boost.” The old, familiar paths (“working roads we walk b4”) are being overlaid or replaced by new, fast, digital systems.
  • The Comfort of the Past: References to “Aging snugs where the brawn ale roost” and “Old peddle tapping in the groove” suggest a longing for simpler, cozier, or more rhythmic times.

​2. Time, Schedule, and Pressure

  • The Tyranny of the Clock: The section about “Clocks” is central, highlighting a constant pressure: “Clocks to wake, Clocks to fall asleep,” “Clock on time while running late,” and “The gates clocked off.”
  • Modern Anxiety: “App every 30 seconds and ya almost there” perfectly captures the modern feeling of being constantly tracked, hurried, and lured by digital promises.

​3. Disillusionment and Hidden Conflict

  • The “Game” and Greed: “Occupational hazards flooding the game,” “As the greed plays offer a lock, rock,” and “Blame those f*#kers hogging the pot, what pot?” point to systemic unfairness, workplace struggles, and resource hoarding.
  • Loss of Self/Identity: “Mask of honour mark of right” suggests a public facade or role is being played, while “Scares so true they need a new day” indicates deep-seated pain beneath the surface.
  • The “Beat Lost”: “To old ‘old shadow boxer. Beat lost.” suggests a fight that has ended or a fundamental rhythm that has been disrupted.

4. Surreal/Abstract Imagery

  • ​”Wild sea’s in a flying tin can, knowing about those sleeping pills” is a striking, almost cinematic image of precarious, stressful travel or a journey under artificial control.
  • “Angel painting well within lives” suggests a hidden, positive, or spiritual layer within the mundane struggle.

It’s a powerful and rhythmic expression of the tension between modern life’s technological speed and pressure, and a desire for authenticity and freedom.

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